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This is some incredible work. It really did hit home for me because I too have best friends struggling with sexuality and its consequences. I am so so so glad ...

Hello again! Here for a short mini teeny tiny review because there is not much wrong with this article. Not much wrong at all. I think its great. Loved your ...

Hello There! Promised you I'd review some of your work so here goes :D A poem about love. Being your first poem on YWS, I don't know if you are ...

Hey hey hey! Look at this! This has definitely gone places! I'm loving it. There are tiny nitpicks but you know I suck at those, so ill leave them to ...

Hello, Alrighty then, lets get down to business. Good story. I like the concept. First problem: Minor Issue. "jumping from one hostile to the next", You mean jumping from one ...

Great Job describing this. I'm very familiar with Asthma, I thought you really captured the image well. I loved the rhythm and the flow. Very easy to read. I had ...

This story has potential... I really enjoyed reading it. Few problems. IT WAS REALLY LONG... REALLY LONG. Not really a short story. Chapters maybe? Few grammar stuff and forgotten words ...

Hello there :) Alright then... First off, Great job capturing that moment mate. You did a great job relaying the scene to the reader. I love the imagery, vivid, perfect ...

Hello! First of all. DANG! Good job man! This is some great stuff.. LOVED IT! Okay now.... I do think you could have had a better title to it. Something ...

WOW. This is Brilliant. Very powerful. I loved your wording. You are so talented :) I do feel you could improve your younger sister's perspective. I liked how you started ...