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Hola Swavvy, You've an interesting story here, and it definitely kept my attention from beginning to end. I think you've got a really good handle on tone and on rhythm, ...

Hullo Ferrum, BlueAfrica has given you a splendid review below, which is super rad. I'm going to take a little bit of a different take on your work, because I've ...

Hullo there, I love to see new kinds of work on the YWS and checking out a personal essay is something very new for me! Your passion for the novel ...

Yo Noodles! Here for the last instalment. I won't bandy about with this one, after you've been reading my other comments. This chapter of all of them needs the description ...

Hola noodles! You totally answered my question about the money for the dance. But if the boys HAD payed then the teacher surely couldn't have banned them, right? Or they'd ...

Hi Angrynoodles! As I said I tumbled over here to check out your next chapter. It has the same kind of solid and easy tone and flow as your first ...

Hey Angrynoodles, You have an interesting story here! I like that you're including comedic elements to your romance, so that we get to laugh a bit as we proceed. At ...

Hey Princess, So you've already been getting a lot of love on this in the form of comments and likes, which is super rad to see. I'm going to go ...

Hullo MemoryHunter, This is an interesting poem you have here. I like the relative simplicity of your concept, just looking at the colour green and the way you slide that ...

Hullo Alexacode! I know you've had some discussion below in reviews and comments and that's pretty exciting! I've only glanced over the other reviews but a key point really stuck ...

Hullo CzarAdi, You've picked a very popular notion to be writing an essay on. I don't particularly agree with a lot of the sentiments that you're talking about here, which ...

Yo CeeDubs, I'm glad you're posting poetry, cause poetry is the hella. Your poem is an interesting one, and I think I can see what you're going for here. Unfortunately, ...

Hey Hyperview, I'm not totally sure where you're going with this. It feels like some creative non-fiction, and it works within the genre itself. However, I also feel a little ...

Hi Fantasydragon! Let me tell you, I ADORE North & South. It's a beautiful novel and a completely gorgeous miniseries, I completely agree! However, Lava is right when she suggests ...

Hullo MJthesongbird, Welcome to the YWS, it's lovely to see you're already about and posting! I like that you have a fairly clear idea of who your characters are and ...