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The Kite Runner Rough Informal?

“The Kite Runner” is rated PG-13 (Parents strongly cautioned). There is a discreetly shot if entirely unnecessary scene of a child’s rape and an extended bloody fight involving punches and a slingshot.

Intro

The Kite Runner movie was way better than the book from mine and everyone’s opinion, I can prove this throughout my essay if you can follow along as I blabber on. I’m not a very strong reader and I have troubles staying on task or keeping the train of thought flowing, so reading the book The Kite Runner by that Afghan didn’t really get my attention, I tried to follow it as best as I could but it just compare to the movie through the visual aspects that you actually experience with your own eyes! Through a television of course. The movie displayed many differences than I read in the book and showed a lot more horrifying scenes that I just couldn’t picture in my head, but they came very clear on the high definition projector. The way Hassan was walking as blood was just dripping from his you know where, Amir getting beat to smithereens by Assef in the embassy when they are old men and Amir is coming back to save Sohrab. Most movies don’t give the book justice but in this one called the Kite Runner it most definitely did! It portrays an amazing picture of Afghanistan, Amir and Baba’s home as well as images that I didn’t get of certain or most characters. The screen play revealed more emotions then I could get out of the book in a way that I couldn’t understand or tell what Baba’s tone was when he was talking to Amir or Hassan or anyone for that matter and the movie obviously revealed that perfectly.

Main

Yes people do and did call it a simple read but it was just too much information needed to tell the story that the author was trying to get across. I couldn’t comprehend all that and remember to keep it all together as I read throughout the entire 500 page book, yes I do have a bad memory and maybe you have a great one but this is my essay. The movie had a way shorter and more creative affect with the way they changed it up, not completely but definitely enough for me to love the book over the movie, just a few bits were different here and there however I do mean different in a good way. Now that I’ve given it some thoughts, I think the lack of the intimacy which the book so successfully delivers can be compensated on screen by a narrative voice-over. The personal narrative of the book is what makes the story poignant and moving.

Main

The film could benefit from a first person narrative to draw viewers closer and to convey more effectively the hidden turmoil’s that can’t be expressed cinematically, or technically. A well written narrative voice-over could impact the audience, show a different perspective, and can completely change the story. Certain topics in the story such as the very descriptive rape scene in the book where it creates little emotion and in the amazing movie The Kite Runner shows Hassan the little Hazara boy in the alley way cornered by three boys which gives you a very strong images especially when the boy undoes his pants then you can’t see the actual rape seem, thank god but just when you hope it’s over, it cuts to a new scene of Hassan walking back home and blood dripping from his you know where, leaving a red trail in the shiny white snow. As well as the scene when Amir is trying to go and grab Sohrab the violence and shootingand special effects do so things that sound really good in books sometimes look quite ridiculous in movies. However, my imagination is limited by my sense of reality and so when a book has a car crash I see a little ding and a bit of broken glass, where as a movie will usually just blow the car up in a spectacular show of carnage. Logically I know the car probably wouldn’t blow up but watching it on the screen I can go with it. Reading about it, I will usually tone it down.

Main

The vast land of Afghanistan is a spectacular beauty that stuns most foreigners who visit primed to expect violence, suffering and terrible poverty, because that is mostly what gets on televisions and makes headlines. It was not always that way. Before the decades of fighting that have ripped the country apart, it was a well-known if rather exotic stop on the 1960s tourist trail. Snowcapped mountains, relics from empires thousands of years old, deserts and lush valleys lured hippies in long-distance buses and richer visitors on the (Pan Am-owned) national airline. Before I said that about Afghanistan you probably thought of poverty or maybe just a less lucky place more of a third world environment and it’s kind of alright because got the same though from the book however the movie has such a strong image portrayal in a way of being able for the viewers (you and I) to see how the city actually is compared to the book where again you have to visualize what the city looks like. Same with Baba’s house and the courtyard, the movie shows it completely better in a way that I thought it would look like a more poverty looking kind of place, but it is actually a very nice house enclosed by a beautiful stone wall for security and privacy.

Conclusion

Visually movies are more appealing. To many people a page of text is daunting and dull and they are automatically locked out from accessing the story. You know the music that plays as one particular character comes on screen. It tells us the bad guy is coming or that the hero is entering the fray and whether we like it or not it gives us a slight emotional charge that just isn’t there when you read it in a book. If you want the perfect example of this, watch Star Wars. Luke Skywalker comes on screen, cue either the wistful music or the hero music. Stories are more accessible to a larger number of people in movie form than as books. Overall the movie is an adequate adaptation of the book, as a nominee for the Best Foreign Language Film category at the Golden Globes this year, hopefully, it can draw viewers’ interest to dig deeper into the profound story.

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Hello, InfiniteRectangles here with a review for you!

Okay, first, I really liked the passion you put forth in your writing. You clearly care about the topic you are presenting. However, I did see some flaws in the delivery of this piece, which I can hopefully help you with.

While being passionate about something is great, there were times when you seemed quite arrogant and preachy. Like "hey listen to me cause I know this is what everyone is thinking anyway." Which brings us to another issue. I know that this is an informal essay, but Do. Not. Generalize. Your. Audience. Your readers don't want to feel accused and singled out, yet sometimes I felt that way while reading this. Especially here:

"Before I said that about Afghanistan you probably thought of poverty or maybe just a less lucky place more of a third world environment and it’s kind of alright because got the same though from the book"

Don't assume you know what your reader is thinking. I actually wasn't thinking this at all. Personally, I loved the book, and I think Hoosseini did a great job describing the landscape of Afghanistan and the many beauties of it. To prevent having an accusatory tone in your writing, avoid saying "you". It generalizes your audience which is something you definitely don't want. And remember, just because you feel this way about it, doesn't mean your readers will.

"The Kite Runner movie was way better than the book from mine and everyone’s opinion, I can prove this throughout my essay if you can follow along as I blabber on."

Again, generalizing your audience. The first sentence would have been just fine without "everyone", but by adding it in you have made this sentence inaccurate. Because, quite frankly, not everyone feels this way. In fact, most people I know feel the opposite way. Also, you said that you could "prove this", yet you didn't provide any facts to support your statement. You didn't reference any statistics are articles and while I understand this essay is informal, don't say you can prove something and then not support your thesis. I'm not saying this wasn't factual at all, because there were factual statements in here, but none of them proved how "everyone" liked the movie better than the book. Instead of saying everyone, you could just leave it as just your opinion or change it to "many peoples' opinion". That would help you to not sound arrogant.

Next and final thing: rambling. Even informal essays need some type of structure, and if you are trying to argue a side, you definitely want to make sure your essay makes sense. There were lots of occurrences where you got off track or just rambled about your own personal opinions. Essays need to sound mature if you want anyone to take you seriously. You can't just state your own opinions as facts because they aren't facts. They're opinions.

That's all I have for you. Overall I think this essay has real potential, but you just need to work on your delivery. You need to make sure you get your point across in an efficient and effective manner instead of rambling. I hope this didn't sound too rude and I hope my feedback helps you improve your writing skills. Keep writing and have a wonderful day/night!

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PenguinAttack
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Hullo there,

I love to see new kinds of work on the YWS and checking out a personal essay is something very new for me! Your passion for the novel and for the film really come through clearly in this essay and that's something to be proud of.

The first thing I want to mention is that you have a lot of rambling sentences. I know this is an informal essay but you still need to keep your writing interesting and effective, rambling is neither of these. The biggest problem is that you're often trying to clarify why you're saying what you're saying, or you're telling me more than I need to know in one section. Try reading your paragraphs out loud, I think you'll find that a lot of the sentences you have need to be cut back a bit so they're a bit more accessible and easy to read.

You have clearly defined sections to your essay through your headings - which technically don't belong in an essay, have you put them there so you're aware of which section is which? However, your conclusion introduces a new concept - that of music in film - when it should be solely about summarising your points and reiterating the answer to your question "which is better". You need to move the conversation about the music to its own paragraph an perhaps expand on the concept of music in the film by using some concrete examples.

Examples are one of the things that your essay is missing. Rather, concrete examples or scenes from the film and sources to justify the points you make - like when you're talking about Pan Am - would really help your essay move into a more sophisticated bracket. Your readers like to know some quotes from the novel or the film to remind them about those great descriptions or characterisation.

This is a clearly written essay with passion and interest in the topic at hand. You've done well to write something interesting and informative! If you make any changes to this, I'd love to know.

Thank you for posting.

-Penguin.

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nicenigerian Comment

suppose to be informal

you can always edit your work by finding that blue button c:



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