PenguinAttack

A Villanelle is a type of poem, FrayedJane. What happens in these kinds of poems is that every line of the first stanza is to be repeated down through the ...

Niagini! So with this. This is almost slam poetry. Spoken poetry is weird, it flows in a way which is less kind to the visual reader. I've read the poem ...

Hey Niagini! So! You already know this is good, because you're good. But it needs some tweaking, a better kind though because I think you're getting into the swing of ...

Hullo gowtham1! As the two above me have said, welcome to the YWS! I hope you find a happy place here. I will just mention that chatspeak (u rather than ...

Heyhey, Lumichi. I'm sorry this is so late, I am a terrible friend. To make my first note, I haven't read any of the other reviews on this poem, I'm ...

Hi, Lammal! I'm here as directed. I enjoy the concept of your poem, and you have some very lovely imagery going on here. However, I think you're pulled back drastically ...

Hi Kyll. I’ll get straight to the point here; I don’t like this poem at all. I can see what you’re doing and how you’re doing it, but it’s not ...

Hey Matt, I’ve come for the review you requested. You requested a more in-depth analysis for this one, and I’m happy to give it. To be on the level, I ...

Hi Emmylou, This is a long poem, and I think anyone willing to put in the effort for a really long poem should be clapped on the back a bit. ...

Hi Matt! I really like your title for some reason; I think it’s a fitting and pleasant sentence. The poem itself, well! You’ve picked a hard form here (in my ...

Hi Whisperer! I’d like to firstly congratulate you on writing through lack of inspiration! I’m never very good at forcing myself to write and make it work. At the same ...

Hi Nia! I don’t think this is a poem so much as a prose poem. This isn’t just due to longer lines which characterize the poem; it’s more due to ...

My love! First and foremost, I like this. In fact, I like this very much despite what I’ve done to it in the following lines. I love the mixed feeling ...

Untitled: Green carpets are shreded and scattered in blades, < Removed “plant-like” guiding our feet and keeping them off the lambent brown floor. As we walk through the giant's shadow, ...

Okay Eli, We’ve already talked about this and I know as it’s a personal poem you don’t want to be attacking it too thoroughly in the change area. As such, ...