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Hihi Chloe! Back again for the second section. I feel like you'd not have these split in terms of a real novel, and that you've just split the prologue for ...

Howdy Chloe! Lovely to meet you! :D It is wonderful to see a work that is so full of imagery! You definitely have a handle on describing what you want ...

Oho, I return AGAIN! So this chapter is moving nicely forward, though I do think you could probably stand to connect some of these chapters together - I understand you're ...

Knight! Aw man, you wrote these chapters before I reviewed (obviously) and yet I'm so glad you took my advice and addressed the rest of her family. ;) I do ...

Hey hey Aleycat, Here to review your poem as requested. You're a strong young woman and so I'm not going to begin with a review sandwich here, I'll get to ...

Oho, back again is I! I like how you're cutting up what is happening, and I'm glad to be having a look at the woman's house as well as the ...

Hullo hullo Knight, I hope you feel duly honoured to be my first review in soo long. I like what you're doing here! I enjoy Twelfth Night as a play ...

Hello lovely! I am going to leap straight into this and not play any games with you. Your first two stanzas are excellent, I love the feeling I get from ...

Licious, this is a beautiful poem. I particularly love "sillage" because I had never encountered it before and it is a beautiful word and I will use it from now ...

Hi Susurrus! I can tell that this poem means a lot to you, particularly considering the subject matter and the completely clear intent and emotion that is running through the ...

This is heartbreaking. Really and truly this sank into my chest and then weighted there while I worked out how I felt about this poem. Turns out, I absolutely incredibly ...

Hey Igglepop, This is a KotGR review hitting you up in celebration of libraries, fun, and the Grimm. I like that you reworked a Grimm tale, cause I just utterly ...

Hola BlackNether! I love that you're writing poetry. It'a always so exciting to know that people are working with and creating poetry around the site because it is a beautiful ...

Hola Inifinite! I like what you're doing with this poem and I like the images that you are working with. You have way too many first person pronouns in this ...

Hi! You have some super gorgeous images here! You're right that it doesn't work how it is at the moment, you need to have some more structure and attach more ...