PenguinAttack

Hi Vampricone, You have this under novel/chapter and I do think you have what could be the beginnings of an interesting novel here. You have rushed the events of the ...

Hullo Vampricone, I have not read the Shadow House books, but it is clear from your brief description and this fanfic that you're a big fan of them. I think ...

Hi Purple67, You have a really clear voice here that is striving to be heard through the many lines of this poem. At it's core, your poem is trying very ...

Hullo dragonofphoenix, I can see you have been writing this work for a considerable amount of time - and I'm not going to pretend that I have read all of ...

Ed

Hello Ed! You're mixing your punctuation here. I know that should be a criticism, but I actually really like it because your tone is such an indecisive one: what you ...

Oh now, would you look at this? What an absolute moment this poem is. Your language here suits in each section, I appauld the soft insistence and the straight forward ...

This is a feeling we have all had; in a dream we had a fight and maybe it wasn't a dream and even if it was one, what if it's ...

Hi Morrigan! I see you have two interesting reviews on this work - and another review also. I thought I'd pop by and throw my two cents into the ring. ...

Hello Thisislegacy, I'm not sure exactly what you're going for here. If you're looking just to rant - a blog may be more your bent. However, if you're writing poetry ...

Hola Windsailor, I think that was an interesting exploration of the Bible and it's constructs. My biggest initial question is what version of the Bible you are taking your quotes ...

Igglebop my delight, my blessing, my heart upon hearts! I have missed reading your poetry. That said, this is a thick poem, heavy with unnecessary description I think. Your first ...

Hi Radrook! I always love to choose a Green Room work for my infrequent reviews, and this time it's you! woo! So I'd like to begin with what you already ...

Hi Killeham, First, a gripe which is: I don't understand why you uploaded this as an image? It's so much harder to copy the lines to show you exact points, ...

Hey Aleycat! So you know I love you and you also already know I love the black/strap assonance because it is A+ work. You also know that I'm less into ...