Pencil2paper

Thanks for the review Omniyus! As far as the stanzas go, I was trying to mimick the rhyming pattern of the song it's after, I Dreamed A Dream. Thanks again!

Thanks fire! Yeah, about all of the typos, my computer was being stupid. Will fix it soon.

Thank you!

I agree completely, and the whole desklamp thing isn't wierd at all. As far as the last line, it wasn't supposed to really be part of the poem, just sort ...

No problem. Can't wait to read it!

Thanks, Purple!

I guess I wasn't too clear on what I was trying to say. As far as the passing independant living, that is a class that is offered at the school ...

That's cool that you preformed it. My aunt directed a high school preformance of the musical a few years back.

Thanks!

Thanks for your input.

Thanks for reading. This is the completely unedited version, so there will definitely be more revisions to come. Thanks for your input! By the way, if you ever need a ...

Thank you! In all honesty, even though I write poetry, I don't like a lot of it either.

Thanks!

Once again, hilarious and awesome.

We did a similar project at my school where we did a Constitution for the teenagers of America, to our parents. It was pretty funny, especially ecause no one was ...