PenNPaper

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. Our Father who are in Heaven There is not more than one Father, is there? 'who is'. dignitythat You probably forgot to hit the space button. ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. It begged to know, How many clicks does it take to find a sweater? After a comma, the next letter is always a small letter. It ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. at the edge of the coi pond, the wind gently pulling at her hair How about saying 'with the wind pulling gently at her hair'? sheild ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. Well, for a pretty short story it did catch my attention, somehow. Your story was smooth flowing, not much problem with the plot either. Just a ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. Interesting storyline you've got here, is it about some secret agent mission kinda thing? You could have described the look of the interior of the house ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. Worry for my father and brother began to gnaw at me 'Worry' should be 'worries'. Well I would say that I like your story very much, ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. This story was well written, I was just hooked to the end(I feel like reading it again) Henry, I can’t If the MC was Henry's servant or ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. This story was truly well done, you captured the essence of love here and the story flowed smoothly. Now, on to some minor mistakes. a professor ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. I would like to say that this story is very creative, interesting and a little funny(The fish in the ear part). “There she is, Ted.” I said. ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. He ran through the street's Without the apostrophe here. grafitti all over the wall's Same here, and 'grafitti' should be changed to 'graffiti' in mind those creatures ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. I found your story interesting, what I understand is your MC changes her whole body during a class, and then sprouts wings and flies. Very imaginative and ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. This story was well written, and kept me wanting more. From what I understand, this son of man is trying to save something, right? And the ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. It was a good story, even though it was short, you did it in second person, which was quite remarkable, especially since second person is hard to ...

Hi, it's PenNPaper here. I like your story, it's descriptive and interesting. (I must admit that you kept me hooked) There was a sentence that you started with the word ...

Hi, PenNPaper here. Interesting, i was hooked on i must admit. The whole global warming thing, it sounded boring at first, but then it became exciting. Also you spelled holes ...