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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Away and Gone

    Thanks for the review!

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Thanks for the review.

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Hope Death is a Gentleman

    Thanks for the feedback!

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wandering Woman

    Thanks, I%u2019ll make those changes as soon as possible!

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wandering Woman

    Thanks!

    Apr 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Also didn't want to mention a character and start a waifu war lollollol

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Wow, that may be the best way to write a review ever! Thanks! You really did hit the nail on the head. I wanted to add more detail, but I ...

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Thank you for the review! I probably should add more detail to the beginning. I'll work on that as soon as I can! Thanks!

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Yeah, the proper term for me is technically otaku, and it's what I'd rather be know as, but I figured "weeb" would make the poem a bit funnier. Thanks for ...

    Apr 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Away and Gone

    Yeah, they do seem similar! What I was trying to do was have the first one show the woman wanting to leave her abusive husband, and in the second, showing ...

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Thanks for the review! Weebs unite!

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Thanks for reading!

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Hope Death is a Gentleman

    Thank you for the review!

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Weeb

    Thank you for the review. As for the words you mentioned, I didn't even stop to think about how confusing they might be to someone unfamiliar with the terminology used ...

    Apr 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Wandering Woman

    Okay, I'm definitely taking your advice on the last line. Something seemed off to me, but I couldn't put my finger on what it was. Your rewrite of the line ...

    Apr 2, 2018


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