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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 6 Part 1 - An Awkward Dinner

    Hey! So, while I like this chapter, (or this part of it, rather) it seems like it was written hastily because of the number of typos. And that's really all ...

    Jun 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 12

    Hey, here to give you the review I promised! So, like you said, this chapter does shed some light on things. Now I finally know what side Zeke is on! ...

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11

    Hey, I've gotten to it now! :) So, I did notice a lot of grammar errors. I always lose place of them though:/ And I don't know how to do ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess

    Hey! Finally got to it! This chapter was very enlightening. I still want to get back to Castor, Miles and Kalan though! :) Ok, so I won't go through the ...

    Jun 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction

    First of all, WHAAAAAATTTTT???????? YOU WROTE A FROZEN FANFIC??? YOU?? Ok, I'm done now. Big surprise though. So, I'll get right into my review now. This is such a cool ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 9

    Hey! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this. So, I love the new character. I mean, I hate him, because he IS a villain, (right?) but I love ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 2 - An Invitation to Mount Crusto

    Hey! So, I know I already reviewed this chapter when you first posted it, so I'll try not to repeat myself too much. I won't really say much about grammar, ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 9

    Hello, PeanutPhoebe here to review your work! I don't usually review chapters in the middle of a book, but, well, you know, it's Review Day, and we're trying to get ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 9

    Hey! So, I haven't read your other chapters, so I really don't know what's happening. But I'll do my best for Review Day! To begin, I'd like to say that ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    Hey! I'm PeanutPhoebe, here to review on behalf of team red! So, I haven't read your other chapters, so I really have no idea what's going on here, so this ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Unstable: Chapter Two

    Hey! Even though it's no longer in the green room, I thought I'd review your work. Sorry I couldn't review it last night! :/ So, like I said, I'm loving ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Unstable chapter one

    Hey! Thought I'd review this before Chapter Two:) So, this is an awesome first chapter. Although we don't know a lot about the characters yet, I can see their personalities, ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Meager

    Hey! First off, this is a very well-written story. Although I don't agree with some of the content, it is very interesting. I do have a lot of questions though, ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: The end of innocence

    Hey, PeanutPhoebe, READ ALL OVER's co-leader, and I'm here to review your awesome piece! First off, I loved this poem. It expressed your feelings so well! I know how you ...

    May 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: cough up an avalanche of mottled blue-bottles

    Hey! Here to get you out of the Green Room! I like your thoughts behind this poem; they're very...thought-provoking. Great description, huh? :) So, I read that this is a ...

    May 24, 2014


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)