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Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 6 Part 1 - An Awkward Dinner
Hey! So, while I like this chapter, (or this part of it, rather) it seems like it was written hastily because of the number of typos. And that's really all ...
Jun 17, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 12
Hey, here to give you the review I promised! So, like you said, this chapter does shed some light on things. Now I finally know what side Zeke is on! ...
Jun 11, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11
Hey, I've gotten to it now! :) So, I did notice a lot of grammar errors. I always lose place of them though:/ And I don't know how to do ...
Jun 9, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 4 Part 2 - A Bloody Mess
Hey! Finally got to it! This chapter was very enlightening. I still want to get back to Castor, Miles and Kalan though! :) Ok, so I won't go through the ...
Jun 3, 2014 -
Re: Frozen Fan-Fiction
First of all, WHAAAAAATTTTT???????? YOU WROTE A FROZEN FANFIC??? YOU?? Ok, I'm done now. Big surprise though. So, I'll get right into my review now. This is such a cool ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 9
Hey! Sorry it's taken me so long to review this. So, I love the new character. I mean, I hate him, because he IS a villain, (right?) but I love ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: Castor's Tale Chapter 2 Part 2 - An Invitation to Mount Crusto
Hey! So, I know I already reviewed this chapter when you first posted it, so I'll try not to repeat myself too much. I won't really say much about grammar, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 9
Hello, PeanutPhoebe here to review your work! I don't usually review chapters in the middle of a book, but, well, you know, it's Review Day, and we're trying to get ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 9
Hey! So, I haven't read your other chapters, so I really don't know what's happening. But I'll do my best for Review Day! To begin, I'd like to say that ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Removed
Hey! I'm PeanutPhoebe, here to review on behalf of team red! So, I haven't read your other chapters, so I really have no idea what's going on here, so this ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Unstable: Chapter Two
Hey! Even though it's no longer in the green room, I thought I'd review your work. Sorry I couldn't review it last night! :/ So, like I said, I'm loving ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Unstable chapter one
Hey! Thought I'd review this before Chapter Two:) So, this is an awesome first chapter. Although we don't know a lot about the characters yet, I can see their personalities, ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: Meager
Hey! First off, this is a very well-written story. Although I don't agree with some of the content, it is very interesting. I do have a lot of questions though, ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: The end of innocence
Hey, PeanutPhoebe, READ ALL OVER's co-leader, and I'm here to review your awesome piece! First off, I loved this poem. It expressed your feelings so well! I know how you ...
May 24, 2014 -
Re: cough up an avalanche of mottled blue-bottles
Hey! Here to get you out of the Green Room! I like your thoughts behind this poem; they're very...thought-provoking. Great description, huh? :) So, I read that this is a ...
May 24, 2014
