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Hi. : D So, I think this was pretty good, but I'm not quite sure why it's in the poem section. It's got poetic feel to it, it sounds like ...

I thought this poem was awesome! Nothing wrong with it! Pauses are sometimes what makes a poem.

Whoops I meant Poems... Typo... TEHE sorry.

whoops... I posted two... Hehehe%uD83D%uDE06

Hi Σ(￣。￣ﾉ) So, I overall liked this short story, but I just didn't really like all the "..."s maybe every once in a while, but in every single paragraph? That's ...

Whatever. I was just trying to help you... : P

Okay, so I fixed all stuff you pointed out (And I'm glad you did! I wasn't quite sure about the flow of this poem before...) and I hope you like ...

Yeah, I get it. Thank you very much for the feed back. I'll fix it. But I am really glad that you liked most of it!

Like goldenrebel, i had a little bit of difficulty following this poem, but I loved the rythm of this poem. It was beautifully written, and I thought it was pretty ...

I got rid of a lot of the so's hope it better now...

That really means a lot. Thank you. The feed back was great! %u2665

I know, I know cheesy and cliche... I'm working on it! Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you sooooo much for the feedback! I'll edit it... ^_^

This was a cool story. But there's more, right? I like how it was written, but nothing really happened. It looks like this could be a great story. I can't ...