PeaceLuvPoems

I agree with VeerenVKS, this was a really nice and creative piece. I love how ou started it, with a happy, young couple that loved eachother so much. And how ...

This was great! You're a really good writer. This chapter was really good. I can only wonder how long it took you to write this. I love the character, Alice ...

Hi. : D So, I think this was pretty good, but I'm not quite sure why it's in the poem section. It's got poetic feel to it, it sounds like ...

So... Whoa! I liked that first part... So... Um... Dunno, it draws me in makes me want to read. Want to know who this masked man is and what he ...

Okay first things first... I can't wait for the next part! ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆ I really love this first bit. It's mysterious, and I instantly fell in love with the ...

Hi Σ(￣。￣ﾉ) So, I overall liked this short story, but I just didn't really like all the "..."s maybe every once in a while, but in every single paragraph? That's ...

Like goldenrebel, i had a little bit of difficulty following this poem, but I loved the rythm of this poem. It was beautifully written, and I thought it was pretty ...

I love, love, love this poem! Though the lines are a bit long... I like how the fact that the girl had seen herself throughtout her life was not revealed ...

Whoops... i accidentily posted two. Ha! Clumsy me, right? Anyways, love the story!

This was a cool story. But there's more, right? I like how it was written, but nothing really happened. It looks like this could be a great story. I can't ...

Sorry~! I accidentily posted two... : P Hahaha

I will say that this short story was dark creepy... but then again, I guess that's what you were going for, right? I like how the memory is kinda foggy. ...

I really liked the beginning AND end of this story! I liked how you used onamonapia in the first part. And also how you called Arnie's eyes "panda eyes" I ...

I really liked the beginning AND end of this story! I liked how you used onamonapia in the first part. And also how you called Arnie's eyes "panda eyes" I ...

This was a sad story, but nicely written! There were a few spelling and grammatical errors.There could be a more... i dunno... umph! to it. i guess I pretty much ...