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I tried to make it better, but I'm not sure if thats exactly what I did...

I think you should go ahead and start posting it! Sounds pretty good to me. I cannot wait! paw

I liked it. It made me drift into the Fairy world. I don't totally agree with Gordon. Repetition sometimes sounds good in poetry and I think it did flow in ...

This was very confusing, in a really good way. It is meant to be that way, a confusing poem! I really liked how you used the repition, making it have ...

This is kind of hard to critique since it is so short... SO I think I will just wait until you finish this fully. Let me know when you do ...

It looks like you have a great plot going on here! This was really good! I loved it! I didn't spot any spelling or gramatical errors. I cannot wait for ...

I thought it was really good even though it was kind of confusing. In the begining it was a little rough. I think you can combine some of the sentences ...

This was really good! It drew me in! I loved the description you used in this poem! Nice job! Paw

I loved it! This was perfectly written. The way you write your characters is very good. My favorite part was when the cloth was removed to reveal a paper crown! ...

*did not finish*

This is hard trying to change it so that it does not sound like a laudry list, like you said, (talking to Doc. Kitty) Well, I will try, but it ...

This was really good. I liked how you did the verses by using the time in order. Sorry, I'm not good at explaining, but I hope you know what I ...

Oooo! I absolutely love these books! I kind of want Bella to stay with Edward, but also at the same time I want her to go after Jacob! Well, I ...

oh! lol ...just to let you know, it might take a while for me to think of something for the next chapter!

? Where is the writing?