PatriciaTina

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Hey! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your fanfic this evening! :D So let's get started! Nit-Picks So, first I'll go through some nit-picks, though there really weren't many that ...

Hey there! I was gonna critique this last night, but I had to go to bed... And then school. So this won't be that long of a critique, since Emma ...

Hey there! I haven't read an Artemis Fowl fanfiction in forever! Isn't it such a good book though? But I better get on with the review now. But first, I'll ...

Hey there! Here I am to review, as promised! I'm sorry if I go a little overboard on the nit-picks, but I am seriously a grammar freak. So if I ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! How are you? I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your chapter today! So let's get started! First, I'll go through some nit-picks and then I'll ...

Hey there! I see that Jet has gone over most of the nit-picks so I'll just go over the overall writing. Also, if I do find anything that Jet hasn't ...

Hey there again! I'm sorry I didn't get here earlier, so I won't be able to give you a full review, but I'll try my best. Sasha and Pink got ...

Hey Jetpack! I really liked this! You did an awesome job with that prompt. There isn't really anything I have to say. But I would like to say that I ...

Hey there! Wow! This is just such an amazing start to your story. I really can't find anything to nit-pick other than the fact that the first paragraph might be ...

Hey there! Trish here to review your story! How are you this fine evening? Anyways, lets get on with this review! I'm currently testing out a new review strategy that ...

Hey! I'm here to review the third chapter, just as I said I would! This story is so awesome! Anyways, I'm gonna be trying out a new review format, so ...

Hey there! Sorry I didn't get here that fast, but I'll still try to review your second chapter before moving on to the third. First, I noticed a wee problem ...

Hi there! I will be reviewing your work this fine day, but just beware, I can be a bit of a nit-picker; but all I say is meant to be ...

Hey there! I just want to say that your story was amazing and incredibly entertaining. I didn't even find that much to nit-pick. However, there were a few typos that ...