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Passionwriter

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Man I Loved

    I loved this poem!! The way you use sass in the dialogue is perfect for the context. I really liked metaphors and similes,\. Though in this part I agree with ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)

    Hey, I want to say that I really liked this poem and really liked your style of writing. However, I would have to agree with CupcakeQueen123. There were some punctuation ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Hi here is a quick review for this story. First of all I would like to say that I really liked this story, thought the opening line didn't catch that ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Stay Away

    Hi there!! I am not that good at making reviews and this is only my second one so it wont be that good sorry. Now to start I would like ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth, Chapter three; Who on earth am I?

    Hi there I really liked this chapter though it could have some improvement. I am new in all of this reviews and all, so hope you like it! I really ...

    Jan 18, 2016


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown