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Passionwriter

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Man I Loved

    I loved this poem!! The way you use sass in the dialogue is perfect for the context. I really liked metaphors and similes,\. Though in this part I agree with ...

    Jan 21, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy wounds (rough draft)

    Hey, I want to say that I really liked this poem and really liked your style of writing. However, I would have to agree with CupcakeQueen123. There were some punctuation ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Winnie the Punk

    Hi here is a quick review for this story. First of all I would like to say that I really liked this story, thought the opening line didn't catch that ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Stay Away

    Hi there!! I am not that good at making reviews and this is only my second one so it wont be that good sorry. Now to start I would like ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth, Chapter three; Who on earth am I?

    Hi there I really liked this chapter though it could have some improvement. I am new in all of this reviews and all, so hope you like it! I really ...

    Jan 18, 2016


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