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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Core Cities Chapter One Part One

    Hi Pheobe!! I'm gonna become your most annoying reviewer ever..... So just to avoid personal-ness from this point on I'll act like I don't know you or Anna. Okay? Okay. ...

    Aug 7, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Hands that can do everything!

    Hi!! I understand this is more a prayer, but I just wanna say a couple things. One thing is, this prayer is really beautiful. You're like a mini psalmist. I ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 15: The retaliation

    Ahh!! Climactic chapter. I can just feel the tension. Dialogue spot on as always!! Random but "We glance at each other, and walk toward the conglomeration. No one pays us ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 14: The Attempt

    Ok this chapter kinda freaks me out. It's super well written! But what kind of magic is this? Like only fantasy magic, right? I don't know but the sorcerers' master ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 13: Lucian

    Happy Review Day!! Go team Aqua!!! Anyway.. This chapter gets a little confusing as I go along reading. Lets talk about lunch. First I think the whole name discussion between ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 12: The Tutor

    Ok I'm here to review. And also fangirl over your book :P (Do I start too many reviews with "Ok"? I feel like I do..) Anyway.. Aw I really like ...

    Jul 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 11: The aftermath

    Ok! Woo hoo! I'm back to read and discuss and review. So let's get right into this shall we? I don't want to be a wet blanket because I was ...

    Jul 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 10: The Impression

    Hi again. Ooh! Things are really heating up!! The first two paragraphs are a little confusing. Not the best way to open up a new chapter. Just sorta reword it ...

    Jul 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 9: The Theory

    Hi again! Kinda a short chapter. And it's all about Lucian. Oh snap. Why?? Lol. Couldn't Billie have noticed Hunter? Even a little? Sometimes I want to slap the character ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 8: The Classes

    Oh my goodness!! I'm soooooo sorry!! I haven't had accesses to internet for like five days and I couldn't review. But I haven't deserted you! I might have to desert ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 7: The Roommates

    *Frowns then sighs* Sadly, I'm not on of the first reviewers on this chapter. Oh well. I'll get over it :) Ok I love all that's going one here!! Yay! ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 5: The Academy

    Ok this chapter is great! But I really. really. really think that it should have been divided into two separate chapters. Like The Academy might stop at "Don't worry, you'll ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 4: The Realm

    You always keep me on my toes! Ahhhh! This chapter seems a little dry. Which is okay. Not best but okay. It's sort of a filler chapter seeing that things ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 3: The Arrest

    I'm back. Hopefully you won't get sick of me and I won't be repeating myself. Another great chapter! *applause* I got to see a little of Billies everyday life at ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2: The Magicians

    WOW!!! Wow. Wow. Wow. (Ok I'll stop now with the wows) Oh my goodness!!! The difference between this chapter and the last is remarkable. With the last chapter I had ...

    Jun 26, 2014


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
— John Barton