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That's funny. If you need help with that, you should contact someone with a red name, like Rydia or Meshugenah . They may be able to help. It's not really ...

That's funny. If you need help with that, you should contact someone with a red name, like Rydia or Meshugenah . They may be able to help. It's not really ...

Hey Cactus girl! I would review this work, but it isn't formatted, and it's a little long. I think if you would break it down into paragraphs, or split it ...

Hey! I'll try to give this a review tomorrow, you don't see much non-fiction on YWS.

I can't believe I forgot! Welcome to YWS!!!

Thanks for the review! It is a school for psychics. I'll find a way to spice up the classroom scenes. They seemed a bit boring to me too, except for ...

I'm going to disagree with the first reviewer as well. Your word choice was a strong and unique part of the poem.

I apologize, I thought these could be deleted. Please ignore this.

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Thanks for the review! I'm working on the second draft of it as we speak. Your suggestions have definitely helped. I'll go ahead and clarify some of the events in ...

Aww! My grandma used to read me Rainbow Fish.

I'm sorry, don't take my feedback too harshly. In the end, all I'm trying to do is help you improve this piece of writing. I'm sorry it was nitpicky too, ...

Try not to be so sensitive, he wasn't saying you sucked. He wanted to be helpful. Unfortunately, he did come off a little bit mean, be thankful he took the ...

Hey there! Time for your review. Like almost everything I do, I try to follow a formula. I start by pointing out any grammar, spelling, or awkward syntax as well ...

Please ignore the awkward formatting! Something funny happened when I copy and pasted it.