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Thank you. I completely see where you're coming from with adding in more about Jude's memories. I wrote this in one go late last night, which might explain why it's ...

Thank you. I completely see where you're coming from with adding in more about Jude's memories. I wrote this in one go late last night, which might explain why it's ...

Dang, it deleted the codes. I'll type them out with spaces in between so it doesn't get rid of them. Crossing out: [ s ] [ / s ] Italicising: ...

Crossing out is: Italicising is: Bolding is I'm not actually sure about colouring because I haven't done it for ages. The only way I know to do it would be ...

Fair enough about Max's rudeness to Silven. I don't think you should get rid of it entirely because it makes sense for her to be defensive. It might just be ...

You're very welcome! And thank you for the follow! :)

I will consider it, though between my own novel writing and YWS reviewing I'm not sure I could commit to critiquing an entire book. Nevertheless, I'll try to keep up ...

Quite the proposal! :D

There's nothing wrong with paragraphs being just sentences, so don't worry about that. There's no rule for how long a paragraph should be. I'm glad the review was helpful! :)

Not at all, I'm here to help. :)

Never say you shouldn't write and never say you don't have talent! The only way people get better at writing is by creating things and asking for guidance, and that's ...

Glad to hear it! You're welcome! :D

Thank you for the review! About the grammar: spiralled is the English spelling - we often use double 'l's where Americans use one because we're awkward like that. 'Supped' is ...

These are characters I may write about again, so more about Dawson might be revealed at some point. Thank you for the review. :)

Let me know if you want me to review any of your other pieces! :)