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Glad it helps! Honestly, if you can't remember, just make it up. People won't know the difference. :)

Okay, so I am sort of right. In that case, I would definitely try to signpost it less - it feels like you're hinting very, very heavily at the minute.

I'm glad it helped!

Exciting! Looking forwards to it.

I try to be in-depth, haha! :)

That makes sense! And it isn't the opening?? Well, it certainly works as one. :D

Thank you! I may change a few 'demon' referents to Iza's name, but I think part of my choice to use 'the demon' so frequently is because Hester cares more ...

Ah, that's fair enough then!

Oh, that's interesting! I guess it's because the name is quite ambiguous. It's odd how you assume a narrator is a certain gender when you're left without cues. Still, her ...

That's fine! Once you've got the whole thing written it'll be easier to tell which of the slower parts don't need to be there, so I wouldn't worry too much ...

Mom should be Mum, sidewalk should be pavement, comforter should be duvet/quilt and shotgun seat should be passenger seat :)

That's fine. I've been super busy as well so I completely get it!

I'm glad! It would be such a shame if you didn't continue this

Looking forward to it!

Thank you for the review! Though it probably isn't that likely I'll go back to this after so long (and it was only ever an experimental thing anyway). Also, just ...