Panikos

Hi, Flumadiddle! Pan swinging by for a quick review. Nitpicks Griffin was lying below me The past progressive of 'to lie' (as in 'to be horizontal') is 'was lying'. The ...

Hi, Flumadiddle! Pan back to review. Same drill as usual: nitpicks, overall thoughts, suggested grammar/expression changes in blue . Nitpicks His face showed clear worry while his tail flickered back ...

Hi, Sheadun! Pan here for a quick review. I'm going to point out small comments as I read and then wrap the review up with some overall thoughts at the ...

Hi, Shootingmoons! I'm Pan and I'll be swinging by for a quick review. I'm going to point out small comments as I go along and then close with some overall ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Pan returns to fry up yet another review. First things first: Yaaaaay! Kiernan is back! And with that out of my system, let's get onto the nitpicks. Suggested ...

Hi, Lightsong. Back again to review chapter eleven. Same drill as usual - nitpicks as I go along, grammar/expression changes in blue , then overall thoughts. Small Comments Xesar and ...

Hi, Lightstong! Finally back to review. I'm going to nitpick as I go along. Suggested changes are in blue . Nitpicks ‘I don’t really think there’s anything you want to ...

Hi, Flumadiddle. I'm back again. Sorry for the wait! I'm determined to get back up to date with this after dropping the ball for so long. Blue text = suggested ...

Hi, Irislillygray! Happy Review Day! Pan dropping in for a quick critique. I haven't read all of the previous chapters, so I apologise in advance if I misunderstand things, but ...

Hi, DemonGoddess! Happy Review Day! Pan dropping in for a quick review. I don't have a massive amount to say about this because I'm not familiar with the characters, but ...

Hi, Flumadiddle. Happy Review Day to you! What a perfect time to get up to date with this story. Blue text = suggested changes. Nitpicks “You need to relax Muluth ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Final review before I'm up to date! Small Comments ...until it formed a circle with a complicated design inside. Can you be a bit more specific? 'Complicated' is ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Let's see if I can get completely up to speed with this novel before Review Day is out. Small Comments Before he left, he gave Edna a small ...

Hi, BlueAfrica. Back again. I'll review this as I go along, same as usual, then close with my usual overall thoughts. Suggested changes in blue . Small Comments Her voice ...

Hi, Lightsong! Pan popping in for my first review day critique. So glad to finally have more of this. When you mentioned that it had been accidentally deleted I was ...