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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 42.1
Hiya, Blue. It's a new dawn, it's a new day, it's a new week of LMS, and I really need to help clear some stuff out of the Green Room ...
Jul 9, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 2: Layer 32
Hiya, Mea! Sorry it's taken me a few days to get to this. What with the tide of LMS chapters rolling in, it's hard to know where to go first, ...
Jul 8, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 1.1: Sofeas
Hiya, Lightsong! I thought I'd swing by and review this new novel of yours. I'm glad to see you decided to post it up in the end. It'll be the ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Own My Soul - Chapter One
Hiya, ScarlettFire! Happy Start-of-LMS! I thought I'd swing by and review this for you. I'll start with the smaller and more nitpicky comments, then I'll move onto my overall thoughts ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: Vyheria - Prologue
Hi, Sheyren! I thought I'd swing by and review your first LMS instalment, as I really would like to keep track of as many novels as possible. I'm going to ...
Jul 4, 2018 -
Re: (LMS IV) The Drowner: 1
Hiya, Biscuits! Amazing for you to have written your first LMS chapter so quickly, so I thought I'd swing by and review it. I'll start with my smaller comments about ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 18.2: Ilami
Hiya Lightsong! I think I assumed that I'd reviewed this after I read it (silly me) which is why it's taken a while for me to get round to a ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 41
Hiya again, Blue. Another Redway chapter! I always look forward to these. Small Comments Two of their newer adoptees I love that they're called adoptees, not 'rebels' or 'soldiers'. Redway's ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 40
Hiya Blue! I read this chapter right after you posted it but I was too busy jetting off on holiday to write a review, so what better time to catch ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: The Other Side Of Paradise [March short story]
Hi, SimpleBicycle! Pan dropping in for a quick review to help you get this out of the Green Room. I'm just going to comment on the story as I read ...
Jun 21, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 39.2
Hiya Blue! Dropping in for a review. Let's see if I can keep up with you from now on - I do seem to be crawling slowly out of my ...
Jun 20, 2018 -
Re: Constance's Monologue
Hi, eiaeh9! Pan dropping in for a review. It's nice to see a monologue kicking around on YWS amongst the chapters and poems and short stories. You don't often see ...
Jun 19, 2018 -
Re: Spaceship
Hi, shanaic! Pan dropping in for a quick review. Because this is pretty short, I'm just going to give you my comments as I read and then round off with ...
Jun 19, 2018 -
Re: Small Excerpt From A Story I'm Writing...
Hi, DarkenedPens! Pan dropping in to fry up a quick review. As this is such a short piece, I'm just going to read through it and highlight my thoughts as ...
Jun 19, 2018 -
Re: Black Water: chapter 1
Hi dwyn! I don't believe I've ever reviewed any of your novels, so I thought I'd pop in and change that. I'm going to start off with small comments and ...
Jun 18, 2018
