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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 59
Hiya, Blue! The penultimate review! I've officially read the whole story at this point, so I want to do it justice in my last two reviews. I'm going to comment ...
Oct 13, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 58
Hiya, Blue! I can't believe how close to the end we are! Same as in the last review, I'm just going to ramble comment as I go and try and ...
Oct 7, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 57.2
Hi, Blue! I'm super burnt out from RevMo but I'm still here, magenta-clad, to offer some critique. Apologies in advance if I end up sounding like a broken record. I'm ...
Oct 6, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 22.1: Gael
Hey, Lightsong! I'm getting in early on this one. I feel thoroughly tired out from RevMo but I want to make sure I keep up with this. Small Comments That ...
Oct 4, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 5.4]
Hiya, Saen! Just dropping in for the gay to review this chapter while it's still in the Green Room. Small Comments "What's your favorite thing about this so far, Cassie?" ...
Oct 3, 2018 -
Re: Descendants- Chapter Three
Hiya, ChieRynn! Happy Review Day! Just dropping in for a quick critique and my fiftieth review of RevMo. I'm afraid I haven't read any of the previous chapters for this, ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: The Hero's Brother (6.2)
Hiya, scribbles! Happy Review Day! I've not read any of the other chapters in this novel, so I apologise if I misunderstand stuff that's already been established, but I'll do ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Promethean Chronicles Book 1: Chapter 3
Hiya, kman! Happy Review Day and end of RevMo! Sorry in advance that I haven't read the previous chapters of this, but it's been in the Green Room a long ...
Sep 30, 2018 -
Re: Frazil D2
Hiya, zaminami! Just dropping in to review this. Small Comments Istood, my feet in the wind-swept snow, staring at the frost that had turned the river into Mother Nature's art ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: cLUSTER
Hiya, WanderingCloud! Just dropping in for a quick review. As the piece is so brief, I don't have a great deal to say, but hopefully you'll still find this helpful. ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 57.1
Hiya, Blue! Dropping in for another review. You were disparaging about this chapter, but I actually really enjoyed it. It was surprisingly violent, especially for this story? I've always laughed ...
Sep 29, 2018 -
Re: Hunted 2.2
Hiya, Noelle! Just dropping in for a quick review. I haven't read any of the previous chapters of this, so I apologise if I'm ignorant about some areas of the ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 5.3]
Hiya, Saen! Just dropping in for another quick review. Small Comments "Where do you keep your tissues?" Aspen gently asked, leaning over towards Cass' backpack. Her hand hovered over the ...
Sep 26, 2018 -
Re: Pretzel Bites Ending
Hiya again, Dest! Back again to review the second part. Even though it did turn out that Damelo had a crush on Arii, I'm actually super happy with how you ...
Sep 23, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 5.2]
Hiya, Sae. Finally I get to review this while it's still in the Green Room! ^.^ Small Comments Aspen, meanwhile, was pressing up against her side as she peered down ...
Sep 23, 2018
