PandyBear528

Hey!! I really liked the beginning to this story! It has a lot of potential, keep it up!! The only thing I found in it is when you say.. I ...

I really liked reading this!:) it was a good start to a good story! I kinda want to know some back up for why Razhel can't talk. Was she born ...

Okayy, I really like your story so far (: I think you're a great author and I cannot wait to hear more from you (: I know I'm kinda a ...

the only other thing i see is: "Finally I get my time to be with Brian." You changed the point of view :) lol I think its very cute I ...

Good part two! :D lol I'm confused on one..thing though. What's here name? She's been said to be: Samara Samria Samaria I'm just kinda confused :P lol other than that ...

I think it's pretty good so far :) the only thing that i would change after Sunny is.. "His ears are too big for his face and his eyes are ...

wow. This is great :) I love them!! Pm when you get the rest up please! :) I'm veryy interested in reading what's more to come. I really like The ...

Okay... so everyone pretty much got the editing done.. I just wanted to comment :)) "And she turned back and looked at me quizzically, probably wondering why I was talking ...

Hey!! It's me Pandy! :P whoaaaa twist in the ending!!!!! Omg. lol I really thought they were together or something!! Sister?? Hope you explain that laterr :) PM me when ...

omg... You have to keep this going. I love it!! It's soo sad! But Ian sounds adorable and I love how Kali trusts him. Is Ian the same age?? Hmm, ...

OMG JOSEPH! I LOVE IT. I love how it became a complete circle. How what happened to him happened to Brenton : ) That was good lol :) you're AHHHmazing. ...

I trotted down the steps. I saw my mother at the table staring at me. She knew something was wrong. The whole house knew that something was wrong. I cried ...

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG no joke, I soooo read this during school today!!!! I had no idea it was you!!!!! :D haha i find that quiet amusing. I really ...

Very cute, but a couple of things i saw... I'd always play Power Rangers with her at recess. change at to during, it sounds better :) She was always the ...

oo good, I'm excited to read more! A few things... Disgusting, thought Bane when he caught the scent. He lifted his head from the carcass of a freshly killed deer ...