PandaRawr

When I read peoples work I don't look for spelling or capitalization errors. Others do that well enough. If I did too I would just be another voice in a ...

This was really good. You described it so I felt as if I were sitting there wathching the twilight pass on, and thinking of a past lover. The flow was ...

This was a really good poem. The thing I usually find in poems is that they may have an idea but if you give it to me its hard to ...

This was something like me. My attitude may seem like I think I'm better than everyone else but truly I just want to stick out like an ugly in new ...

Usually I don't care for stories set up like this where you have multiple POV's. But this one was interesting because they were so different. It was realy good because ...

This was very good and I enjoyed it very much. Though I can't think I got a little lost withthe china dolls bit. I didn't quite understand it and it ...

This peice is better where puncuation is concerened. As I've come to expect from you, the poem is very real, and well written. The idea is so basic that it ...

Wow. I can see you are a very good writer and will be very popular around here as we love writers with talent. This piece is so common amongst us ...

Usually when one writes a peice as long as this one about one subject the writer repeates himself. Which gets on my nerves, but you didn't. This was very honest ...

This was not the best story I've seen. But take into consideration that I am hardly ever really impressed. Writing can always be improved. Obviously no one can be so ...

This is a very good start to a best-seller if you decided to make it a novel. Of course there are the usual typos, which are number two enemy, right ...

Wow that was great. And My world is right again. This may sound sexest but evey guy I've ever met are nothing like the guys on here. These guys are ...

What I came to romantic short stories looking for was not this. But it did, in a twisted way, make me think. Not all romances are gushy or sentered around ...

Wow. I am ashamed of myself. As a writer I stand firm in my belief that every piece of art, wich writing is definetly, has room for improvement. This peice ...

I loved that you were so descriptive in the setting as to where the reader got a detailed picture, but not so that you drew the attention away from the ...