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PancakeandWaffle

PancakeandWaffle

  • Other » Humor, Other Re: 20 Things I Wish I Knew In Elementary School

    Hi! Thanks for reviewing!

    Nov 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: This Girl

    Heyo! I know that this review was not intended for me, but I dont think that fixing "she's usually all I can think about" is a big problem. I mean, ...

    Nov 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What It Seems Chapter 2 *Revised*

    I'm glad that you liked this and that my improvement was a lot better! I'm liking this version better myself too. I really learned how to work this and hopefully ...

    Nov 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What It Seems Chapter 2 *Revised*

    I just fixed it!

    Nov 16, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: Test

    YES! Too many of the tests! I need a bit of help. I think I am going a bit insane with all this testing. What is neuclius of an atom ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Sad

    I do not have much to critique here! Yuor sense of writing style is magnificent. I hope for more of these beautiful stories from you. :) Waffle~

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What It Seems Chapter 2 *Revised*

    It feels a little clunky in the begining, is that just me?

    Nov 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Tales of Hayden - Chapter 1

    No prob! Also I love your profile picture, it's so cute!

    Nov 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What it Seems. Chapter 1

    Aww~ thank you so much (lol, there is no struggle since my friend is Waffle and I'm Pancake :) Anyway, yeah I hoping to be able to sort out the ...

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Realistic Re: Front Page Material

    Alright, just checking to see if there was going to be a big ol' western showdown up in here. It's no prob Candy, I'm glad it helped you and Happy ...

    Oct 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I miss you

    Update: We reunited again!! She siad that she passes up my scool on the way back from hers and she asked her mom if she could stop by and see ...

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live and Let Die- Intro

    Who is Krea?

    Oct 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: More Than What it Seems. Chapter 1

    Jeepers, thanks a bunch!

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live and Let Die- Intro

    Hello! Oh, yes people always get hungry at my name ;) I will clear up anything you mentioned and take your advice. By the way, it is kinda mandatory to ...

    Sep 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Live and Let Die- Intro

    Thank you so much! I will fix that part and I can't wait to post more too! Let me know what direction you think it's going in/should go in! Thanks! ...

    Sep 29, 2015


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