Pan

Is it a lion?

No problem! And it's okay, I wouldn't know anything about having Catholic parents, so you have every right to assume things. Just keep in mind that poeple are different and ...

Thanks

Thanks!

I'm actually jealous of your relationship with your father. But it's good that you don't have to deal with emotional stress like that. It's good to communicate with him, and ...

Ah, I originally had the last lines of stanzas 2 and 4 longer but others told me that they were too verbose. Glad you liked it, though! Thanks for the ...

Thank you so much!

Thanks!

I'll definitely go have a look at your profile! Haha, we do, Pikachu is GODLY.

Hi, Nikachu! First off, thank you for your review! (Honestly, I love being here because everyone actually gives CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, not harsh words and degrading comments) Secondly, yeah, I did ...

I can't wait until you've wrapped it all up! Yaaaaay!

Why not trying reading the poem? Don't just comment of a work for the points. You need to look at the reveiw sandwich. If you actually write a good reveiw ...

*sighs* I have the 'H' and 'comma' problem a lot. Sorry xD I still have to go in and fix a few things. Thanks for your input!

Hi Isha! Thanks for your review, and I have a few responses: I know that I used the term "man" a lot, but really, I had written it differently before-- ...

I love it. Sorry I can't write a really long review right now (wifi= not working, data= diminishing quickly) but I'll write a longer one tomorrow when I have access ...