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Yes, but I've got something else. It's ' pointing to the broken 'Little Tikes' toys strewn across the brown grass.' I think that it would sound better if you tried ...

That would be great, thank you!

Sorry, I don't mean to come off as rude and immovable, but I'm satisfied with how I wrote this, and trust me, I've changed a lot about it before posting, ...

Again, thank you for your review. I've changed it from what was originally written, but I don't have need for any advice. It's not that I'm egotistical or ignorant, I'm ...

It's supposed to be simple. Druggies don't think, really. If they do, they're thinking about drugs, right?

Er, that's what I meant. Without tact, saying it outright.

What I'm saying in the poem is yes, 'you made me a druggie', but it's also saying that in times of heartbreak, I see a *lot* of people in the ...

Thank you, though.

I'm not, ahaha, just a poem.

Got chills. Nicely done, my friend.

Haha thanks

Shucks! Thanks a lot. To address your question about the kids, it says "now", and I wanted it to seem like time has been passing, so she decides that she ...

This is my favorite poem ever. I just thought you should know.

jk i get it, i like it thank u

ok cool but what about a guy and a girl kissing