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Re: Changing World
Hi. This is my first review of a short story, so I will try to keep this helpful. Once your arm falls off, it’s not hard to figure out that ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Aftermath
Hi there. This poem had an air of sorrow that I wasn't really expecting. I have read a couple of your other poems, and they lacked the emotion that could ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Fragile Things
Hi! I absolutely loved this. The whole poem just breathed fragile. Your word choice was so impressive. Each word matched the message you were trying to give and that is ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Cursed
Hello! This was really good to me. I really enjoyed the rhyme scheme in this piece which is unusual for me, because rhyme schemes feel forced most of the time. ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: More So
Hi, I actually really liked your poem. You did an amazing job with it, because you allowed your reader to connect your poem to something before they knew that it ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: deleted
Hi, I really liked your poem a lot! I think it describes how some teenagers feel during high school. I don't know if you meant to, but when I was ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: ~Weathered
Hello there! I'm going to start out by saying I really enjoyed your poem. I'm not good with nit picky stuff, so I'm just going to stick to things I ...
May 5, 2011
