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Hello, Stormblessed242 here! Wow, this gave me some chills! It's definitely scary. There are a few mistakes in your writing, but I'll point those out for you. There are a ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Yay! Part three is here! I really enjoy reading this. I like how Jakira is trying to figure out who Alex is, and then she sees Night ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow. This was powerful! There was a lot of emotion. Between Max's reaction to the fireworks and then the bombing from the Nightwitches, I was very involved ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was an interesting start. Unfortunately you didn't give any detail as to what's going on. Are they vampires or some other being? Where are they? Why ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! I'm here to give your review! This was a very good beginning, giving us hints about whats going on, but leaving it vague enough to keep us ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Nice job on this chapter! Even with how short it was, you managed to give Kerra depth and development. The list was very helpful to catch up, ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Nice essay! I'm not that interested in baseball, but you did a nice job with this! You definitely did a lot of research, and incorporated it well. ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, this was great! Really sweet and heartwarming. You wrote it well, excepting a few spelling errors, which I'll point out for you. Throughout the story you ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a well written essay! It coherent and cohesive. There are no misspellings or grammatical error that I could find. One thing I would suggest is ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a nice essay! I think a lot of us can relate to it. There are a few grammar and spelling errors which I'll point out ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a good first chapter! No spelling mistakes that I could find, so that's a plus. One thing that I noticed is that your dialogue feels ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Welcome back! Glad to see you start posting again. After reading this, I think I'll have to go back and read the rest, it seems really interesting! ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Ok, so I just went through and read all of the chapters to catch up, and I have to say, I'm impressed! Your writing really improved, and ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, this was an interesting read! The idea of modern day vampires living incognito makes for a good story. and the way that you wrote it definitely ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This was a nice little story! Very exotic names, which I love. There were only a few mistakes that I could find. Disease an take me- you ...