Overwatchful

Hello, Stormblessed here. I'm here for my review. Once again, not much to criticize, only one thing to point out, but I'll get to that. There was a healthy dose ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a great beginning! Definitely a very interesting idea. I have a few suggestions for grammar and such, but overall this was great! Mostly, just check ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter, as always :) “I’m just sick of you two whining like there’s nothing we can do about any of this. Honestly, you’re like a ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Hoo boy, now they've done it! This will be interesting to see. I love the way you wrote Gabriel and Ian's interaction. There's a pretty good amount ...

Hey, Stormblessd here. Sorry I'm behind, I just haven't been as active as I would like. But I'm here now, and trying to catch up a bit. Once again, I ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter! I've been somewhat inactive lately, but I'm glad that I didn't miss anything on this story. It's really coming along! Poor Fen, he doesn't ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Ok, let's get this out of the green room! I'm really getting curious as to what the climax of this story will be. I do hope everyone ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Once again, great job! Like Starlit said, I think you missed the maturity rating on this, just pointing out. Sorry I'm so late on these reviews, I ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter! I think starlitmind got all the odd bits, so I'll just leave my two cents. Your descriptions of Gabriel, Ezra, and Lillian's relationships are ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Wow, what a great little story! You delivered a strong message with a very well-written narrative. There are a few ways to make this even better, but ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a beautiful piece! A lot of emotion, and it definitely pulled my heartstrings. Timmy is a very innocent little boy, and Eddie is very kind ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! This was a good story to read! I definitely enjoyed it, however, this site is made to help ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Sorry I hadn't gotten to this until now. RevMo sorta burned me out on reviewing, but hopefully this starts the spark again! Anyway, on to the review. ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a cute little story! It needs some work, but we'll help you out with that so the next chapter can be even better! So first ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! So, I haven't been keeping up with this story, since the sex stuff was a bit too much, but this chapter seems to be taking a different ...