Overwatchful

Hello, Stormblessed here! The climax has begun! I cannot wait to see how it ends! So apparently there is(was) a new vampire. I wonder where it came from... Your fight ...

Hey, Stormblessed here! Glad the story is coming along once again! Sorry it took so long for me to get here. Oh Val, back at it again. Hopefully he does ...

Hey, Stormblessed here! Hoo boy, that was messy. I skimmed, but I got the idea of what happened. Poor Gabriel. This might make things difficult. I wonder what happened to ...

Hey, Stormblessed here! Another chapter, another great job! (It's getting hard to find different ways to say great job lol) I wonder why Gabriel's having trouble with restraint. I have ...

Hey, I'm here. Seeing as you already have 3 reviews, I'll just leave a few comments. Well I'm glad it's been a relatively quiet month, but I hope this gets ...

Hey, I'm here! I liked this chapter a lot! It gave a different feel to Silas. I almost like him now! I don't have any critiques, so I'll just highlight ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter! There's barely anything for me to point out, but here's what I did find: She blinked, dumbfounded, and pressed her fingertips to her forehead ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a very clever story! It's an interesting outlook on the origins of milk. (almond or otherwise.) Your grammar and spelling are pretty good, so there's ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a very cute little story! And it's well written, too. I think a lot of people here can relate to the pain of losing a ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a great prologue! Definitely interested in the background of this world. Your grammar and spelling are very good, so not much to correct there. One ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! This is a great chapter! Looks like a positive change for them, for now at least. I did find a few errors, which I'll point out for ...

Hey, I'm finally here! Sorry I'm late. Another great chapter as always, and I definitely agree with Starlitmind that it feels very realistic! One thing I have to point out: ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Welcome to YWS! Nice to see that you're already reviewing and posting! In the future I would suggest making multiple posts for this story. It's a lot ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Interesting first chapter! These are two very different characters, and they do indeed make a very unlikely pair. Hopefully over the next few chapters they temper each ...

Hello, Stormblessed here! Another great chapter! If this is still rising action, I can't wait to see the climax! Especially as this is a story where I have not clue ...