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Re: 1985 Chapter 1
Ssss Mmmm... To be honest with you I didn't like it. I did, however, enjoy your writing style, especially the first paragraph . But stories about diseases moreover HIV and ...
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: book i am writing
Ok, I'll tell you what you need to do. Get a book (a novel at best) and study how it is writen. About two years ago I was pretty bad ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
Can you say schitzophrenic???? :smt064 It was cute I guess. The only spelling errors I found was at the top when you said between "TO" humans. It should be between ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: Ignore, Accidental Post
Well the whole thing just seemed like a immature rant! A good poem should actually have a point and meaning. This had neither. It made no since and frankly was ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: The Battle Chapter 1(Part One): Break In
I liked it, it looks like it has a lot of potential. With a name like THE BATTLE it sounds like it could be some kind of awsome action story ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Face in the Mirror
Wow! That was awsome, i've been feeling like that lately too. I thought it was great! :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt038 :smt038
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: The Apocalypse-Prologue
What can I say? I liked it a lot! I've been wanting to write about the end of the world for some time now but I've been at a lost ...
Nov 6, 2007