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OrabellaAvenue

May the bunnies hop on your face

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Frost and the Sparrow (Prologue)

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Huh. I didn't expect that to turn into a sci-fi there. I don't often read about animals or science fiction, so ...

    Jun 9, 2023
  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Tallest Tree

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to give you a quick review. Wow... I didn't expect this to be so moving. Or so poetic. The way this is laid ...

    Jun 8, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: Time & Space (Part 3/5)

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. First of all, I just want to say how much I'm enjoying this, and I can't wait to read more when ...

    Jun 7, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: El Paso Fino

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a quick review. Yearning for anyone or anywhere This is probably one of my favorite parts, and I love how ...

    Jun 6, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Black Man, a Noble Sight

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. First, I just want to say how nice it is that you wrote about this. Racism is a real problem, and ...

    Jun 6, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, Literature Re: Wishes to fly

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. I absolutely love the message of this poem! (Or at least what I and the reviewer below ...

    Jun 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Journey

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. I haven't read a poem like this in a long time. It's beautiful, and it's got a lot of meaning behind ...

    Jun 3, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Two-faced

    Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. This seems kinda like a story, but in a very poetic form. (I mean, a lot of poems are...) Throughout the ...

    Jun 2, 2023
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Number One, Elephants, and Magic

    Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. Wow. These are so good! The rhymes are perfectly placed... these are beautiful. There's so much meaning behind each of them. ...

    Jun 2, 2023
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: My Name is Oliver

    Hi! Good morning/afternoon/evening. This... is incredibly sad. There's so much I want to say about this, but honestly I've got no words. The thought of rearranging animal parts as well ...

    May 31, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Season Cycle

    I like the way you don't really capitalize anything except for I and O Sun, and didn't have any punctuation. It gives the poem a certain feeling that isn't really ...

    May 31, 2023


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