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Hi! Random weirdo, here to review. Again, a spectacular chapter. It's full of excitement and humor, and I swear me and Colin often think the same way: Malcolm? He’s subbing ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. This makes me want to cry. This whole poem radiates sadness. The way you write is well-done, and the rhymes are ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. This new team sure is going to be difficult to defeat. What I like about your writing is that readers can't ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. Yay! Alex's back! Wow, that's hard to say aloud. Alex's back. Alex is back. Alex's back. And this is yet another ...

Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. I am so glad I found this story. It's. So. Good. I love this even more every time I come to ...

Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Okay, you just made me shiver. That last line... that last line... The ocean is a merciless and vengeful beast, For ...

Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Fernando... wow... I didn't really expect that. His mental health really has been affected. Everything has to be perfect. In a ...

Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Wow. Another chapter read. And now I've lost all my words. hjakjdfaldadkaldfthisissogood. I wonder why Fernando's teammates don't seem to like ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here with a review. Now we have two competitors for the Great Tortoise Literary Work Contest: you and me. And I've got to say; ...

Hi! I'm a random weirdo here with a review. There are a million things that are making me laugh right now. The fact that Colin accidentally makes the shot is ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to review. You started this a long while ago, but I saw chapter 14.5 in the green room, so I decided, Why not? ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here with a review. This is beautiful! I love the description, I love the message, I love the poem. Everything in this is superb! ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. This was very fun to read, and I enjoyed it quite a bit. I love the ending! ...

Hello! This is a random weirdo here to give you a short review. Welcome to YWS! I hope you'll like it here. We've got weirdos like me and talented writers ...

Hi! This is a random weirdo here to review. Uh oh. This doesn't look good. Lina's willing to sacrifice herself for the world! What a... okay there aren't any strong ...