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I completely forgot about the virus! Thank you for telling me about that, I do need to comment on it in the next chapter part. I was planning too much ...

Also, if you didn't absolutely hate this review, I'd be up for reviewing this novel :D

Hey now, no need to call people names

Sure, that'd be great!

That ought to clear up a lot of* have had to walk on eggshells* It's late for me XD I do want to review your second chapter btw, but it'd ...

I'd recommend changing Lucifer's name, then, and not associating him with the devil. That ought to clear up a lot off muddled and confusing religion you would have had to ...

Ah okay, I'll go read the first story then, and maybe do a review on that one as well. If the neighbors are important, I guess I'm just not seeing ...

OH NO I DIDNT xD I need to go do that, don't I? What did you think of my comments, though?

No problem! And thank you for the compliments :D I hope to read more from the story, definitely

The whole "paradoxes run rampant" thing makes sense after you said it haha, but definitely threw me off while reading it. When it comes to things like paradoxes, or any ...

Thanks for reviewing holy

Thanks so much for reviewing this! I'm glad you enjoyed my dialogue and some imagery I had in the piece. I do try my hardest on dialogue because it really ...

Got it back in the spotlight xD

Ah okay! Thanks for clearing up those things XD perspective makes things clearer! I was just pointing out that, as a reader and at this point, they are very steretotypical!

I'm looking forward to it! I'm going to read through the prologue and I can give you a bit more analysis then. I'm looking forward to the next chapters!