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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 51.1

    Hey Shady! Now that I've had a chance to finally read the entire story of Before the Dragon, I'd like to give some thoughts about the story overall. I shall ...

    Mar 17, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 36

    Hi Shady, some notes: also, forewarning that these notes are probably things I have already talked about and will continue to talk about in my reviews closer to the ending ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 34.2

    Hey, Shady, transcribing my notes here ^^ That also proved absolutely nothing. Obviously she was going to stop people from getting hurt if she could. No one would just sit ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 29.2

    Hey Shady! Back for more notes, and I will let you know that these notes will start to have more thoughts than what I put in handwriting because i have ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 28

    Hi Shady c: here to transcribe more notes. In a very large, broad sense, how important is the beginning of this story to the overall story? I feel like it ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 27.2

    Okay we're finally getting to the new stuff for me, stuff I didn't read in the last draft. I should have more notes about all of this going forward, since ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 26.2

    Hi Shady, transcribing some notes ^^ you've already read all of this for now I believe, or at least skimmed. I might add more thoughts but you know. Her breath ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 20

    Hello hello, more transcribing and further thoughts. I wonder why Aerik calls her Princess instead of Jerica? I have not quite figured it out but I'm sure it's for a ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 17.2

    Hi Shady :) here we are again, transcribing some handwritten notes and more commentary. Jerica closed her eyes again. Another week passed. Maybe a month. A year, even. She was ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 17.1

    She felt like she was being ripped apart. She could imagine she could feel her cells separating from one another, the chromosomes unraveling and flying apart as her molecules hurdled ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 15

    Hey Shady! I've read the entire novel at this point, and I'm really just solidifying my thoughts, especially if you can't read my handwriting XD Some general notes first: -Jerica ...

    Dec 22, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Last Spell 2.1

    Hey there silv! How's it going? I hope your day is well :D I'm going to review this piece now so I hope that doesn't sour your day >.> ive ...

    Oct 12, 2022


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    Oct 9, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 1 (LMS VI)

    SOUND?? rewriting tld???? yay that means I don't have to review the rest of tld because I totally didn't finish that >.> so, like, no more griffin arc, right? XD ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 1.1

    Minty mint mint! I saw this when doing the tallying for LMS and it seems like a very fun read; I am super excited to get into this! She would’ve ...

    Sep 19, 2022


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