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Hey there ariah! Omni here to review once again ^^ Her eyes, revealing her Asian descent at their edges, danced between the pages of the book she clutched. A few ...

Hey there ariah, Omni here for a quick review :D My father never wanted me around boys unless it was Jake, my one and only boyfriend, is this a current ...

Hello ariah! Omni here to review you work again :D First impressions of this beginning is that I feel like it's a tad bit weaker than the prologue in my ...

Hey there ariah! I'm reading back on this piece because I'd like to review the pieces still stuck in the Green Room for so long. Sorry about that!! I stood ...

Hello there LolthQueen! Omni here for a review on this piece :D Flames danced across the ground, over broken boards, up walls, and stacks of hay. Firstly, As Alice put ...

Hey there vampricone :D another review from meeeee -- I'm going through some of the works that's been in the Green Room for awhile and I've stumbled upon this. I've ...

Hey there Vampricone! :D Here for a quick review ^^ I read Part One so I do have the backstory. First off, I want to say that I think you ...

Hey Shady! Now that I've had a chance to finally read the entire story of Before the Dragon, I'd like to give some thoughts about the story overall. I shall ...

Hi Shady, some notes: also, forewarning that these notes are probably things I have already talked about and will continue to talk about in my reviews closer to the ending ...

Hey, Shady, transcribing my notes here ^^ That also proved absolutely nothing. Obviously she was going to stop people from getting hurt if she could. No one would just sit ...

Hey Shady! Back for more notes, and I will let you know that these notes will start to have more thoughts than what I put in handwriting because i have ...

Hi Shady c: here to transcribe more notes. In a very large, broad sense, how important is the beginning of this story to the overall story? I feel like it ...

Okay we're finally getting to the new stuff for me, stuff I didn't read in the last draft. I should have more notes about all of this going forward, since ...

Hi Shady, transcribing some notes ^^ you've already read all of this for now I believe, or at least skimmed. I might add more thoughts but you know. Her breath ...

Hello hello, more transcribing and further thoughts. I wonder why Aerik calls her Princess instead of Jerica? I have not quite figured it out but I'm sure it's for a ...