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Hey Shady! Now that I've had a chance to finally read the entire story of Before the Dragon, I'd like to give some thoughts about the story overall. I shall ...

Hi Shady, some notes: also, forewarning that these notes are probably things I have already talked about and will continue to talk about in my reviews closer to the ending ...

Hey, Shady, transcribing my notes here ^^ That also proved absolutely nothing. Obviously she was going to stop people from getting hurt if she could. No one would just sit ...

Hey Shady! Back for more notes, and I will let you know that these notes will start to have more thoughts than what I put in handwriting because i have ...

Hi Shady c: here to transcribe more notes. In a very large, broad sense, how important is the beginning of this story to the overall story? I feel like it ...

Okay we're finally getting to the new stuff for me, stuff I didn't read in the last draft. I should have more notes about all of this going forward, since ...

Hi Shady, transcribing some notes ^^ you've already read all of this for now I believe, or at least skimmed. I might add more thoughts but you know. Her breath ...

Hello hello, more transcribing and further thoughts. I wonder why Aerik calls her Princess instead of Jerica? I have not quite figured it out but I'm sure it's for a ...

Hi Shady :) here we are again, transcribing some handwritten notes and more commentary. Jerica closed her eyes again. Another week passed. Maybe a month. A year, even. She was ...

She felt like she was being ripped apart. She could imagine she could feel her cells separating from one another, the chromosomes unraveling and flying apart as her molecules hurdled ...

Hey Shady! I've read the entire novel at this point, and I'm really just solidifying my thoughts, especially if you can't read my handwriting XD Some general notes first: -Jerica ...

Hey there silv! How's it going? I hope your day is well :D I'm going to review this piece now so I hope that doesn't sour your day >.> ive ...

Scar!

SOUND?? rewriting tld???? yay that means I don't have to review the rest of tld because I totally didn't finish that >.> so, like, no more griffin arc, right? XD ...

Minty mint mint! I saw this when doing the tallying for LMS and it seems like a very fun read; I am super excited to get into this! She would’ve ...