Omi1

Thank you!!! I really, really appreciate it! :)

Haha, thanks for the review! I completely agree with you, and I knew the words span and glee were definitely forced, I guess I was just in a rush. I ...

This might be the older version, but thanks. :) Not a clue what Assassin's Creed is about, lol. Thanks for the review!

No, no, this is great! That makes more sense, and thanks for you help once again. :)

Thanks for pointing that out! I completely forgot to fix it. I'll keep that in mind, I really appreciate your input. Happy New Year to you too!

Haha, thanks, I appreciate it! It's funny because when I read someone else's work I can tell when they are being wordy, but for myself, it's a completely different matter. ...

Ok, I don't remember reading that, but I guess it's been a while and you certainly don't need my help. :)

Haha, thanks. :)

Thanks a lot. I'm not sure I'll go through and edit this since it was written in the moment that I felt this, but I really appreciate it. Yeah, my ...

Haha, that makes complete sense. And don't get me wrong, the story was well written! Alright, sounds good. :) I look forward to hearing more from you. :)

No problem. :)

Hey, don't know that my opinion counts for much, but here it is anyways. :) The way I get it is that his name used to be Smeagol when he ...

For sure, this was definately a humorous peice of litereature and I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Thank you for all of your reviews, they really helped. I've now rewritten this first part, hopefully you like it. Please review for the new and improved version!

Thanks :)