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  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 2: Worst Case Scenario

    Hi Bella. :) Here as requested to pick up from where I left off. I just finished reading chapter 1 so I can remember what this is all about! Here ...

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General Re: The Sparkle Lounge: The Overture (Prologue)

    OOOO another prologue I can sink my teeth into. I’ll try not to ramble on so just ignore the mumbly parts! Love love love your first paragraph. It’s quick, intriguing ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Celestial Heroes - Prologue

    Hi Olive here to review! I saw the words prologue, fantasy & supernatural in one go. Everything I love! I’m the opposite to Stella..I love a prologue if they’re done ...

    Apr 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Shut In: Chapter 1

    Hi AaricaRae! Welcome to the site & this crazy family.

    Nov 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Imprisoned

    Hey emjayc! Let’s jump straight into a review, shall we? Amazing opening paragraphs! Full of description, senses and makes me want to ask a million questions already. I’m liking this... ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Threshold of Destiny- Chapter One

    Hey Gravitaxis. Pleasure to meet you! I am a fantasy fanatic so I have a feeling I’m going to enjoy this somewhat... Love your name choice. I’ve never heard that ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Secrets in Seaport (EXCERPT)

    I’m sure you’ll be sick of me by now :) On to the third review of your choice - and I have to say that I’m pretty excited for this ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: "The Truth about Hamsters"

    Me again! Back for the second review of your choice! :) Here goes! Plot & Characters This made me laugh so much! I was wondering where on earth you were ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Adventures with My Time-Traveling Uncle - Chapter One

    Hi ComicalCrafty :) Congratulations for winning the Official Flyer Competition with your amazing design! 

As part of your prize, this is review one of your choice! I hope it’s ok! ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter Three: Part One

    *POPS UP!* Yes, I am alive. 

 My birthday is done, over and I’ve come out of my depressed Vampire Diaries state. I am ready to work, work, work and ...

    May 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Confines II

    Back again! xD YAY! She’s alive. Panic over. I kind of feel like she would hate me for liking this fact right now.. I think you’ve done a good job ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: Confines I

    Hi TaliaSankEden xD I’m just about to read & review your second chapter of Confines so I thought I’d better stop by here first. 

I will review as I read ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, General Re: Imaginary Friends - 1: Mercy

    Hi BellaRoma xD 

 Olive here to review your chapter! I will review as I read so that it makes a little more sense to both me and you. 

Here ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Prakfura Raiders: Chapter Two: Part One

    I”M HERE! I know it’s taken me longer than usual but, you know, life and all. So, I’ve read your rewrite of your prologue and chapter one. I love how ...

    May 8, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Werewolf (Edited Version)

    Ok, so I’m here through the request forum! I love anything fantasy so that’s why I picked you and I don’t think I’ve read anything of yours before! Plot and ...

    Apr 27, 2014


There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside of you.
— Maya Angelou