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It was pretty good. It seems like a song I would listen to. What genre of music would this be? Personally, since I listen to rock it was more of ...

Wow, I saw the fact that she was raped coming, but I did not see the guy turning out to be a serial killer. It was a good piece. You ...

This was a really good piece. It made me wonder what my parents would say if I ever told them the truth. I'm bisexual so it's pretty easy to hide ...

This was really emotional, it made me feel for Shira. There are just a few things I want to point out. 1) After the 6th(?) paragraph it goes into a ...

That was really incredible. The rhythm was off at a few points, but other than that it was perfect. The story that this poem tells is very modern in a ...

I liked this because you don't exactly know who this is written for. I mean you, as the author, know who you wrote it for, but to the reader it ...

I passed this story a few times in the green room. It caught my attention, but when I read the description my interest would leave me. You should consider writing ...

That was very beautiful. The images that the poem put inside my head were... How do I put it? Soft. Don't get me wrong, they were very strong and got ...

Woah, just woah. This is hot. I like where this story can go and all the options you have to choose from. It is well written and seems like this ...

That was good. The line "it tis hard to do that and now have them loose there mind" confused me a bit and I had to reread it to understand, ...