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The last two lines are fine, its the two before them that do not have enough syllables: they need one more each. Gurby

An almost perfect sonnet. The eleventh and twelfth lines have only 9 syllables. The rhyming was done well, with very little contriving. The subject itself is vague, but I like ...

Surprisingly not, I think you need to read deeper into this poem: I do not say that I am God, merely that I found God within me. There is no ...

The poem itself is very choppy, you have a lot of short sentences which I don't think work very well. Gurby

I cannot remember the plot exactly because I read it a while ago but I do remember enjoying it a great deal.

Nice, but shallow. It deoesn't leave the reader with any un-answered questions or oideas on which to ponder. We are left feeling your contentedness and tranquillity, but nothing else. Your ...

ditto means "repeat last comment" in this situation.

A good poem, original, with a neat rhyme scheme, but lacking in a definite structure, such as a fixed number of syllables per line. Punctuation would be good too.

A nice haiku. I disagree with Incandescence though, I like haikus, althought they can be more shallow than longer poems. Writing several haikus in series is good as well, perhaps ...

"It was five in the morning, a light fog covering the beach." - this mixes present and past: "was" and "covering", change one or the other. "asked Rowan of nothing ...

This was well written, I coudn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Your style is nice, very fluent. I enjoyed this, it's not up my street but I still found ...

Only one criticism. "Thy true, noble mind grants me hope. Even so," has eleven syllables :D. Very enjoyable.

That was good. If the line length was more constant it would be better, The idea is good and you express it well, even if the word order may at ...

"When I didn’t say to this," - that didn't make sense to me. That was an interesting perspective, and well backed up. I enjoyed it very much.

I disagree with Claudette, I think the poem flows well throughout and the last lines continue on well from the first ones. It is very vague, in a way, but ...