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"It isn't particulary emotional" - whoops, guess I didn't write it well enough then. "Something along the lines of false religion, real religion and God?" - now here's where I ...

If the title wasn't an over-simplication it would have been a little better. The poem itself, however, was good, albeit quite random. It made me laugh, which is a good ...

The Foundation Series - Isaac Asimov, I'm not sure if the last one was written in time for this, but the first few definitely are.

From your logic you would deduce that anything that is more sophisticated cannot be praised because it would be "intellectually snobbish". The reason LOTR is better is because its so ...

Thank you everyone for the replies. To miya: I stumbled upon this house a few weeks ago on a walk and it´s appearance struck me as very original, so I ...

This poem does make sense. That post was not necessary in the slightest.

Very funny, you leave no opportunity for criticism. It's brilliant.

You waited 21 minutes, just be patient! Please! Anyway, I didn't really like it, it's not completely original, you just continue an old children's rhyme. Gurby

Makes no sense, you're just mucking around. Please keep your random musings to yourself. Write something properly. Gurby

This is a list of words which happens to form an acrostic of the alphabet and it makes very little sense when read. Although it is unique and creatiive, it's ...

"sputtering indignantly" - I'm confused, I keep thinking that's supposed to be "spluttering". "The Geezer’s voice cut through the ominous silence, looking positively livid." - does the Geezer's voic

Good, but short, write more! I cannot make any suggestions/criticisms, not much happens.

Why is this in Research?

The language is quite simple throughout the whole poem except for "collocated" which I thought was a little inconsistent. Apart from that it was very good, the enjambment was especially ...

"++ Sherman proceeded across the beach, grinning lazily to himself. “Poor Rowan. I can’t wait for my copy of Blood Red Lullaby.” == " - what are those pluses and ...