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Re: What I Don't Know: Introduction
Here to review. This is a very good introduction. Already we can sense the danger, the trap that the main character is most likely getting into. This, especially, is maybe ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: "Obsessions"
Here to review. I would like to congratulate you on this poem, because it is very good, and I seem not to find any errors in it. I personally don't ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: The Triumph of These Tired Eyes
Here to review. This is amazing. It is wonderfully written, and by the time I finished reading it I had to wait a second to get my bearings and write ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: Dragon
Here to review. I like this, for it is short and simple. However, I think you could make it a bit longer so we could get a better description of ...
Mar 23, 2015 -
Re: All Secrets Untold - Chapter One
Here to review. I really liked this story. You did amazingly at setting the mood at the beginning, and the back-and-forth between the diary and the reality is very captivating ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Sunday, March 1st, 2015
Here to review. This is a good start for a novel (I am guessing this is the start of your novel). I like how you write about who you will ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: The devil in you
Here to review. I liked this poem. It has a nice flow to it that makes it easy to read and the message that you wanted to convey shows well ...
Mar 22, 2015
