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Octaclepassing

  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Saturday Sip

    I said I was looking for places to get published, but haven't got published yet. I went to places like Clarkesworld or Apex Magazine, for short stories. Then after I ...

    Sep 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Saturday Sip

    I haven't stopped writing, Eros. It's been awhile I just went looking for places to get published and decided on doing a short story collection based on a science fiction ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Heather

    The entire story wasn't all that bad. The ending wasn't to be expected by usual readers. The setting and approach were the exact way it should be, if elsewhere then ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Girl In The Clearing

    This is something great. I like how the character has no name or identity for the reader to associate with except with the scenery and the emotion put into it. ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Darkness

    This isn't a bad short story. It's very easy to read. The idea isn't bad, but wasn't used well. It doesn't create much for me. Our main character wasn't well ...

    May 13, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    I like stories that intrigue. This was really really short. I wasn't exactly tuned off, but it shouldn't been much more. It was well written but it needed more to ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: A memory of nothing

    This is truly emotional. It's questioning without answers. The title fits alright, it describes emptiness. It's basically self- doubt and presenting fear to the everyday stereotype path of life. With ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Diary in the Time Gap

    This story was pretty tense. Just like the one review below, it could have been a better journal entry. Thrilling it is, and minimal details have made this pretty neat. ...

    Apr 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Where am I?

    This is some good work. This is philosophical as the writing you have here makes me urge to question things. Do you always write these kind of things? I'd be ...

    Apr 29, 2015


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— Lemony Snicket