Nymeria

This was really cool! This definitely seems like a story that could be elaborated on, even stretched over an entire novel. The mystery and suspense were great, but because it ...

Hi LadyMysterio! I appreciate your non-agressive Christian view on LGBT+ people. I realize this is an older piece, but I did want to pop in for a few quick comments. ...

Hi Vil! This is a really fun retelling of history. It sounds to me like the beginning of a novel told by a sassy narrator. There are a couple of ...

This was really good! I was so happy that your paragraphs are small because that makes a piece so much easier to read. I was pulled right along. I have ...

Hello! I enjoyed this a lot. I love historical fiction and fantasy, and also ghost stories, so this was right up my alley. I liked how you told this story ...

Hello there! Interesting story you have going here. I'll start off by saying that you've got good diction and imagery throughout this. The thing with the colored hair was cool, ...

Short and sweet-- I like it. There's a weird feeling here, of growing up. I'm not sure who the narrator is supposed to be. Maybe it doesn't even matter. Between ...

Hi Dahlia, I really enjoyed reading this mini story. It's melancholy and sweet, and I love the fairy tale vibes. I do have some questions that you might consider addressing ...

Alright. Interesting. Not my perspective for sure, but completely valid. I liked how you rhymed some lines but not all of them-- excessive rhyming can be annoying. "On the oh-so ...

Nice and eerie feel to this. I love the sentence: "It’s such a tragedy that so many of us are experts in harmful things." Though I might stay away from ...

This is beautiful. I love the figurative language- it's so clever. "I am stuck with a tongue tied to honesty"-- fantastic! This poem gets me because I relate to it, ...

Hello! First I want to say that this was easy to read and easy to keep reading, and that is a very good thing. A solid, intriguing beginning is essential ...

This is a really cool first chapter to what I bet will be an exciting story! You've left me wanting to know more about your character's condition and eager to ...

Hey Cat, I'ma give you a short review! Gardens. I love gardens. Plants and life in general, really. I have potted plants all over my room, and overrunning my aquarium. ...

Oh my god I love it. This was so painfully true to read, for me and I imagine every other writer. You put it into words so beautifully, too. I ...