Nyconz421

Is anyone even reading this anymore?

Laying down in her upstairs bedroom, Bailey thought, Two more days before we move to New York. Two more days with Chris and then... She didn’t want to think about ...

I looked over at Gaia. She holding my hand but I didn’t think it would be connected to anything if she squeezed any harder. Not that I could blame her ...

“Welcome,” the man in front of the room said. He wore faded jeans, a black hoodie, converse shoes, and his white hair was sharp contrast to his skin color. “My ...

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I walked into the building with my father next to me. He was amazed at everything and though I tried hard to be calm, cool, and collected, my amazement was ...

I got it from a challenge really. It was "can you writer about a wound?"

Very twisted. Hooked me right away. I love the creepiness of the Map Maker and the naive boy. The story is quite a sucess. Good job.

Amazing job. Very well written. Keep it up.

Very good. You could most definitely make this into a longer story. It has great potential and a beginning that hooks the reader.

I don't know if it's a poem really.... If it is though it's very angry.

Pretty short. Has a few errors. How many heirs did Poseidon have? Could have some potential.

This was a good poem. The only issue would be all the commas but other than that it is very good. It has raw emotion and people can relate to ...

Good poem. Only thing seems as though there should be more to it. Besides that it is good.

I agree with Ofour.