Nutty

Ahaha! Here are some other conflicts that I was looking for. Try not to let all of them circle around Aiden, though. Okay, about the party thing; where are the ...

Of course, that afternoon she was too stunned to think that familiar thought – Aiden said he loved her all the time, but not without proper encouragement. But if she ...

Hey Hannah! I'm impressed. While nothing out of the ordinary happened as such, I was kept interested throughout this section. Although it is short, admittedly, capturing my complete attention for ...

I liked extras. But maybe I was just sick of Tally. And all that slang... >

Hey Rosey! I didn't know the song until now, so there you go. Well, I couldn't see much nit-pick wise >

each one a different colour, each one so unique. You should say each set, or each pair. Each one being different gives me the image of lots of people with ...

I've seen brackets in published books before.... *frowns* I didn't mind it. Though a comma would do just fine as well. Anyway- I'm impressed. While I don't have a lot ...

The bloody knife was safely concealed in my jeans pocket. Jacob and I advanced along the sidewalk that evening, the house engulfed in flames behind us. I could probably think ...

Woah! Murder? Wasn't expecting that! It was not dark again; enough light was present to get around. I don't think you need the 'again'. It doesn't actually refer to anything ...

t was obviously impossible that we would never get out of the house with a suitcase. I think you mean 'ever' rather then 'never'. The sleeping is fine, in my ...

LOL. Well done. Frenchyrude and powerofthree, you understand completely if you've played the sims. If not, well... Brilliant. I like locking them in a room with nothing but an expresso ...

Hey! First off, so sorry for the long delay. My fault. I give you permission to smite me with a rubber animal of your choice. Now, I never read other ...

Sorry this has taken so long! >.

Me on the other hand, inexperienced of silent moving made creeping sounds and great thumps on my every step. You could cut out the whole middle part of this sentence, ...

Hey! Sorry this has taken so long. Bad Nutty. >