Nutty

All three sat in uncomfortable wooden chairs made of a timber of red color with no care taken for posterior issues. Woah. Sometimes it's nice to have the simple version, ...

Oh god, Excal, I'm so sorry about the delay. Hopefully you can forgive me! Crystal clear water brimming with countless fish that literally jumped into poled nets or frequently into ...

Did you know there's two threads of this? Just pointing it out. Maybe you should contact a mod and ask for the other one to be locked. :wink: "Your , ...

No fair. You left me no grammatical errors, no badly worded sentences, or anything else I could pick out! XD Either that, or you've hidden them well enough I couldn't ...

Death is always in the back of peoples minds not matter how comfortable you think you are with it or how long you live. Not should be no. The phrase ...

Blaine endeavored to keep a polite smile on his face, whilst trying not to rise to Mailan’s bait. Whilst? You're not using old language in this piece, so try and ...

Hey, Becki. ^_^ I'm here, as promised. Wow, you've had some top reviews, and have done the editing, I see. This is rather good. Blaine crouched, back bent, concealed in ...

What now? I was as shocked by my appearance as I was confused by my location. Her appearance? When I read it, I immediately assumed she was talking about how ...

A bright flashes of colour zoomed through my mind. 'A' is singular, 'flashes' is plural. I could feel my knee’s trembling and Ryder’s sure and strong arms picking me up ...

:O Dude....awww *is sad now* I couldn't see any nit-picks, at all. Maybe it would have more impact if we knew the girl in the blue silk shirt? Mention her ...

At last I found out the answer to one of my final questions. Actually, he never wondered what it was. When something causes you pain, you find what it is ...

Thank you, Anyone else?? Hold your horses, I'm getting there XD :p My left hand tried to strangle out the pain that was torturing me from the opposite wrist. Huh? ...

Hey, EW. Hrrm, ew? Should I call you Em instead? I think I will. ^_^ As I said, I'll read over your work, so here I am! ^_^ Midori trailed ...

I looked around at the murky surroundings, and at once I knew that I wasn’t supposed to be here. This isn't the strongest first line I've ever read. When starting ...

This is true? Oh, I'm so sorry. :( That's... tragic. I'm not a huge poetry fan, but this had the ring of truth about it, that was moving. I can't ...