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Re: Forever and Always Part 1
This is short but very emotional. You do a great job of getting right into the story and establishing what's going on. What I'd like to see more of is ...
Oct 23, 2012 -
Re: I'll never leave
This was a really sweet scene! I love how dedicated he is to her. Just a few things I noticed, grammar-wise: -"'They’re fine.' She said to me" should read "'They're ...
May 21, 2012 -
Re: Wolfe
Hey! I stumbled across this and I thought I'd give it a read. So, what I did was copy what you've posted, and I put recommended changes in brackets [ ...
May 17, 2012 -
Re: Maple's story
The title is what drew me in: to be honest I thought of the game MMORPG Maplestory, haha! (If you haven't heard of it I wouldn't recommend it, it's kind ...
May 16, 2012