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  • Short Story » Literature, Narrative Re: Lost to the Sea

    Hi! I am here with a short review of this work. The first thing to consider is the length - it's a bit short, but I don't mind it at ...

    May 31, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Project.Xyria-Chapter One

    Hi! I am here with a review of this work. The overall first impression looks pretty good. I see minor typos (I'm sure there should be commas in some sentences ...

    May 30, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Fraud

    Hi! I'm AnotherCrowInRow (please, use just Kay if you needed anything) and today I'm here with a short review of your poetic work. I will say right from the beginning ...

    May 28, 2024
  • Short Story » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: The Meet Cute: Behind The Scenes Edition Part Two

    Aha! So here we have the second part, which I would like to start reviewing :) I like how the second part very clearly follows on from the first, but ...

    May 28, 2024
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Nighttime city

    Hi there, AnotherCrowInRow is bringing you some little review! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This story grabbed me right from ...

    May 27, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Looking at the future with stars in our eyes

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hello again! When I first came across this excellent work a few minutes ago, I knew it deserved a good ...

    May 26, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The UNO Reverse

    I just love this...poem? Meme? Poememe? Both??? Whatever name I give it, it doesn't change the fact that using a meme template as a "poetic device" (welcome back to middle ...

    May 26, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Apocalypse of Explosive Diarrhea

    Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Hi again! Let´s go to the review, now. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know What is immediately clear to ...

    May 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: This Mask

    Excellent poem! I'm not very good at talkin about poetry, but let's do it anyway. I love how there is always talk about masks and why we hide behind them. ...

    May 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 2: "The...Child?"

    Hi! I'm here again, and again with the aim of leaving a review (which will hopefully be less chaotic than the previous one). I see our little one is all ...

    May 23, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Many Gifts of Malia--Part 1: "The Child"

    Heyo! So this looks like an extremely promising start! I have to say this right off the bat: I love your storytelling style. Maybe it's just the first chapter, but ...

    May 22, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Longings

    Hi! What I really like about your work is that we have two poems in free verse. Both have a similar theme and leave a similar emotion in the reader, ...

    May 22, 2024
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: The Meet Cute: Behind The Scenes Edition Part One

    An excellent story, the continuation of which I would really like to hear :) . I like the touch of science fiction that can be felt from the story and ...

    May 22, 2024
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Hell is More Tech Savvy Than Me (and Heaven)

    Hi! I liked your story - I like the humor with which you picked up the topic of punishments in hell. And the fact that people invented everything boring and ...

    May 22, 2024
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: The Inconvienences

    I think I've come across my favorite story yet here on YWS! I like your storytelling style - it's fluent and sometimes a bit too simple, but full of little ...

    May 22, 2024


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