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Re: Gloomy, Randy and No Whiskey: Maturity Rating: Over 13
I don't know if I should have picked the first or second option... um... I can't think of anything to say!
Feb 10, 2005 -
Re: More of Tara's ramblings ;)
I don't personally consider things poetry unless it has some sort of structural point to it. On the other hand, I really liked your writings- very powerful.
Feb 9, 2005 -
Re: Scary Mary (13+, apart from Sam cos she don't undertand 13+)
Wow, that's pretty creepy! What a cliffhanger! Cool job.
Feb 9, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
See above post. I am not confused at all because I know this story almost as well as my own writing. Better, perhaps. Anyways, Hunter, GET ON AIM!
Feb 9, 2005 -
Re: Counting Days
I like how it's a stream-of-consciousness thing, but I couldn't understand it very well. I like the feeling it protrays, though. Very good.
Feb 9, 2005 -
Re: Give a Boy a Gun (MAY OFFEND)
Well, since Brad has picked it apart so well, I'll just settle for saying that the poem was really good.
Feb 3, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Waywatcher"
You know Hunter, you always write well. I'd actually be surprised if you didn't, since you read these type of book so much and in such large amounts.
Feb 3, 2005 -
Re: Dying
Interesting thoughts. I don't know what else to say.
Feb 2, 2005 -
Re: Boundless- Read this one instead of the other one!
Well, I think it's about time to post some more. Anyways, people, please read this now, or else later you'll probably end up overwhelmed by how much there is. I ...
Feb 2, 2005 -
Re: Reisen
I disagree with CAG77; I actually think those last lines added a sort of reminiscent part, which I'm guessing is what you meant to do. I really like this poem, ...
Feb 2, 2005 -
Re: blow (don't read this if youre innocent)
I was wondering whether or not to put a rating warning on this, but I hardly understand it, so... I kinda like the continuous rhyming, but not for that long. ...
Jan 31, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
I wish I didn't already know all of the intricate plot lines and stuff about this, 'cuz then I'd tell you what's confusing. BTW, hunter, looks like you found an ...
Jan 30, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty (16+ for Semi-Graphic Descriptions)
Well, I was pretty clueless about this at the start, so I didn't get any stories or personal stuff or anything. Also, it was hard to add more emotion to ...
Jan 30, 2005 -
Re: [War]
I like how you use a metaphor of war to illustrate the fighting in your family. It really makes the point and draws us a picture that simple explanation wouldn't. ...
Jan 28, 2005 -
Re: Words of confusion
I like how the poem kind of jumps between metaphors and such but keeps the same theme. And I'm not sure what I think about the last line. I kind ...
Jan 28, 2005